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Full metal alchemist is pretty sweet, we have all the episodes but number 43.... and suposudly a lot of stuff happens in episode 43. Yes hughes' death is sad, i ...

Misterwaffles, you look freakishly alike one of my friends... 0.o GAHHHH... i got a hair cut, its really really short. Everyone that could see me was staring at me while ...

I don't really get the S and B headed men/people... Some of those are halarious and some just down right messed up. I like the dead crowd one *pokes drooling ...

" Hey Nate, who is this guy? " clive asked through the headphones he was wearing. " What? didn't you get the memo? " " Obviously not " " Anything ...

Bah its been so long... guess which one I am. (its a relatively bad pic)

Let me be the first to say this, what the crap?

Interesting story, can't go into too much detail at the moment, i skimmed through it, and since it was all jammed together it was hard to read. But over all ...

D-Day, by Stephen Ambrose, its interesting so far, to find out what some people were thinking. I'm only on page 25 though.. Just finished the Crucible, by Arthur miller. Interesting ...

These type of intro's where you write in first person are confusing and in a sense annoying. I have found out that stories written in first person tend to lack. ...

Work on grammar and punctuation. Also sort through this amorphous blob and make clear paragraphs (remember each time a new person speaks, new paragraph). Since you didn't do this it ...

The writing of this peice is quite choppy, the comma's come in either a little to early or too late. This poem also seems like a bunch of different idea's ...

Ok, this is quite an odd intro to a story. Firstly it is greatly lacking description, describing the place, time, and weather can add some extra emphasis on emotion and ...

She stands in the field, Her charcoal spheres pointed to the sky. She stands hoping for just one drop to fall. I figured the charcoal spheres meant that she had ...

Nice, i like the style you got going here. Colored in photoshop? or was this markers? (i suck at both) How long did it take you to do this? (give ...

Hey devon! Glad you decided to join the ever growing community of writers/crazy people. Grammar nazis... i guess some could put it that way... if you wanted to. Canada is ...